So, this is me mulling it over the day after. It's also me getting a little more comfortable with the Cintiq. Any Max Cannon fans in the readership might note an influence and it would flatter me but I didn't realise it would be evocative of the great RED MEAT strip until I saw the repeated image laid out like that. Anyway, a happy accident.
Still some care needed with Manga Studio (what happened with the frame in the last panel on page 2 I don't know but I left it that way as I didn't mind the look of it).
Anyway, please enjoy and hopefully part 3 will be sooner to reach this space....